When Sun Rise,
When The Branches Dance
With Morning Breeze,
When The Flowers Bloom,
When The Birds Start Their Melodious Songs,
I Go For A Morning Walk :)
The Fragrance Of Flowers,
The Cool Chilly Breeze, Feels As Though,
Its My Beloveds' Tight Squeeze :D
Can Feel A Sensibility Of Affection,In Your Arms :D
My Heart Flies Away Like A Rose Petal,
Wafting In The Air,
In An Entranced Waddle,
In My Heart, Love Oozes Through Deepest ,
Rests My Heart & Soul, As A Pure Love Flows :D
I Feel Very Much Protected In Your Arms,
From Worldly Blows :)
In Your Arms I Feel So Comforting From Worldly Blows :)
And Promise To Hold Me Forever & Ever
Without Letting Me All Alone :D
You Melt Me Like A Ice,
With Your Tender Touch On My Skin,
With Your Tender Warm Hug,
With Your Tender Lips On My Cheeks,
With Your Tender Eyes Looking At Me
By Holding Me Tightly In Your Arms :D
Under The Sun, Moon, Stars :D
Under The Sun, Moon, Stars :D
Ps :- Dearies, Again An Imaginary Poem :D
Title, Is Beauty Of Love Bcoz, Being In Garden, I Love The Grass, Flowers, Plants, Trees[Herbal & Non-Herbal] More Or Less, Comparing The Same With Romantic Dreams, I Love Greenery[Creation of God] As Well, Love[Creation Of God] & Innovation Of Love Is By Human Being :D
So What All Beauty I Felt In Garden, Is More Or Less Same To Our Human Love As Well :D So The Title, Is Beauty Of Love :D
Dearies, Tell Me, Whether This Title, Suits Or Not ?? If Not, Pls Suggest Me A Title :D
Title, Is Beauty Of Love Bcoz, Being In Garden, I Love The Grass, Flowers, Plants, Trees[Herbal & Non-Herbal] More Or Less, Comparing The Same With Romantic Dreams, I Love Greenery[Creation of God] As Well, Love[Creation Of God] & Innovation Of Love Is By Human Being :D
So What All Beauty I Felt In Garden, Is More Or Less Same To Our Human Love As Well :D So The Title, Is Beauty Of Love :D
Dearies, Tell Me, Whether This Title, Suits Or Not ?? If Not, Pls Suggest Me A Title :D
14 comments:
A good poem depicting the feelings of a girl in deep love and pining for her lover
A Beauty Of Love..hmm its perfectly justifying the name dear:)...beautifully done:)..
The Fragrance Of Flowers,
The Cool Chilly Breeze, Feels As Though,
Its My Beloveds' Tight Squeeze
loved it:)...
Titke of the post is somewhat different but is is going well with the poem..
it is written with heart...very thotfully..
Pallav
Hey Sahana,
beautiful as always..thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem ..:)
nice one ..:)
A lovely poem written from the heart, a pleasure to read.
Yvonne.
Very romantic and beautiful. I like the title very much. Thank you for sharing!!!
oh it suits it suits! well written dear! :)
how very romantic!
KP :- Thanks A Lot :D
Yellow Tulip :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D
Pallav :- Thanks A Lot :D
Pramoda :- Thanks A Lot Dear :D
Leo :- Thanks A Ton :D
Hi Sahana:)
You have created a big problem for me. Since you are comparing the breeze with love, I really don't know what to choose.
When the breeze blows the sun rises, the branches dance, the flowers bloom and you can hear the melodious songs of the birds. These are lovely word pictures you have created.
I wonder if real love can do so many things. Sometimes love cause severe, intense and excruciating pain in the heart. At least I have felt the pain.
So I would prefer to experience the cool breeze than real love because I can't bear the pain.
You are a wonderful poem writer with a very fertile and lively mind. I enjoyed your lovely poem and the beautiful photo.
Another unique thing about you is that you are always smiling and laughing which is very special. You are spreading happiness:)
Have a fantastic day Sahana:)
Joseph
Joseph :- Hello Sir,
Nature Is Itself A Love :) Nature Make Wonders :D
Thanks A Ton For Dropping By & For Sweet Compliments :)
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