Friday, August 28, 2009

Angels' Sleep :D

Beautiful Scented Flowers
Showered From Above :D
I Could See The Three Precious Lovable
Words Written In Air :D

Thunderstorms Took Away My Heart,
To That Hidden Special Star :D
I Flew So High Above,
That, I Heard Star Whispering,

A Thrilling......Exciting Experience,
Dream Was Twisted Into Reality :D

I Told Star That,
I Want To Have A Huggy Cozy Sleep :)

That Star,
Stretched His Arms, On My Shoulders,
I Leaned On His Shoulders,And
Had A Pleasant Sound Sleep :D

Ps :- Dearies, Again An Imaginary Poem :D Wish You All A Pleasant Sound Sleep :D Good Night :D Sweet Dreams......Take Care :D

Dearies, Can You Suggest Me A Title For This?? I Don't Know, Why I Gave Title As Angels' Sleep :) I Feel Its Not Suitable :(. Kindly Suggest Title :D



A lovely poem with a good usage of words,
I think the title you have given the poem is
spot on.
Have a good week-end.


Pramoda Meduri said...

Hey good one... good night ... Glad that i have read it now itself..:)

Title is good ..:)

Anonymous said...

who says title is not appropriate?! its a beautiful poem! and title is spot on! :)

loved it Sahana!

septembermom said...

Peaceful dreams to you too! I like your title too, but maybe "Comforting Star" is another choice? Lovely poem.

Creativity!! said...

Yvonne :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D

Creativity!! said...

Pramoda :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D

Creativity!! said...

Vinay :- Thanks A Lot :D

Creativity!! said...

Kelly :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D S, Comforting Star Is A Great Title :D

Yellow Tulip said...

very sweet dear:):)..

Creativity!! said...

Yellow Tulip :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D

angel said...

this one is really good dear:)

Creativity!! said...

Angel :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D