Friday, August 7, 2009

A Girls' Pinch x-(

Traveling In A Bus,
Fully Packed.....
My Make up Faded......
As If I Drenched,
In A Heavy Downpour :P

A Person Standing At The Back,
Was Standing As If, He Is Unable To
Find A Place For His Foot x-(

My Pleasant Eyes, Turned Into
Red Chilly Eyes, Stared At Him,
He Sweated A Lot & Made A Place
For Himself :D

My Ring, In Left Hand Ring Finger
Was Falling...
Felt As Though,
London Bridge Is Falling Down.....Lolllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ohhh God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It Was Terrible,
But Had To Go To College.....
Somehow Reached College......With All
These Non-sense :)

Ps :- Dearies.......This Happened Yesterday While I Was Traveling In Bus To Go To My College :) Hey, I Didn't Know, How To Attract This Poem, But, Still Tried To Do My Level Best..But, As I Share Every sort of Poem, Wanted To Share This Too :D

Hey, Title Is Girls' Pinch Because, My Red Chilly Eyes, Scared Him To Find Place For him :) I Really Don't Know, Whether This Title Suits Are Not :( If Any1 Can Suggest Me A Title :) You Are Most Welcome :D

16 comments:

Pramoda Meduri said...

Hey Sahana...

Funny, yet lovelyy..:)

And for me, the title is perfect..:)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

I loved this......and the title is just right.


Yvonne.

Vyshu said...

:) As usual nice one..title fits..! count my vote too..
hw ya doing?

septembermom said...

This is a cute one! The title is perfect:)

PD said...

My Ring, In Left Hand Ring Finger
Was Falling...
Felt As Though,

London Bridge Is Falling Down.....Lolllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


This one is really good one.. :D

Creativity!! said...

Baby Pramoda :- Thanks A Lot Sweety :D

Creativity!! said...

Yvonne :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D

Creativity!! said...

Vyshu :- Thanks A Lot Darling :D

Creativity!! said...

Kelly :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D

Creativity!! said...

PD :- Thanks A Ton For Dropping By & For Compliments :D

Deepika Gupta said...

he he he... it was cute
Good effort :D

Sapphire said...

Hey!
Your poem was cute, funny and oh-so-lovely!! Do keep writing :)
I had a smile on my face after reading it :)

chinnu said...

hey funny and lovely poem!! he he he..... very nice...
My Ring, In Left Hand Ring Finger
Was Falling...
Felt As Though,

London Bridge Is Falling Down.....Lolllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this one is superb!!!

Creativity!! said...

Sapphire :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D

Creativity!! said...

Kavya :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D

Creativity!! said...

Deepika :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D