Have you had cold showers of pain
My friend, you've stood in my rain
Deathly feeling of loneliness
No need to feel shameless
I've been there before
Not wanting to feel any more
Your hearts been broken in half
Mind still living in the past
Cold dark thoughts of suicide
Why don't I do it tonight
Don't worry it will go away
Learn to love another day
Put it in the back of mind
Let it rest and you will find
Dark clouds begin to part
New love will mend the heart
Thoughts of suicide disappear
Self- esteem will reappear
One day you'll be able to say
My friend you've stood in my rain!!!!!
6 comments:
I too have stood in your rain.
Loved the poem and the message that came across.
Yvonne.
@ Yvonne :- ohhh Its My Pleasure :) Thanks a lot :)
The pain and heartbreak is conveyed so well. Good job with this poem!
@ Septembermom :- Ya....Pain & heartbreak is very hard to accept :) Thanks a lot :D
great poetry! very good one! keep going girl :)
@ Apoorva :- Thanks a Lot :)
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