Tuesday, June 9, 2009

When Will...................

When will you come,

When will you embrace,
When will you feed,
When will you gift a Labrador for me :)

When will u stretch your arms,
for me to put my heads
to sleep on your arms, your arms
being my pillow :D

When will you take me to Antarctica
When will I hug Polar Bear :)
When will you show me, Holland,
When will I spend time with you :)

When will I see you
When will I stare at you
When will I talk to you
When will I relish your voice

When do we hold each others hand
walk down the street, in a cool breeze
in a lonely path, covered with rose petals
When will we take those rose petals

When will we collect those rose petals
of our first meet & preserve it for rest of our life
as a mark of remembrance of our first meet :)

When will we stay beside each other,
embracing tightly,
breathing from each others' breath :)

When do we experience all these,
when will that day come,
where only me & you, exist on that
rose petals path :)


septembermom said...

I love "breathing from each other's breath". So beautifully stated. Lovely poem :)


I too like the words"Breathing from each other's breath" good use of words, As always
a pleasure. to read.


Creativity!! said...

@ Septembermom :- Thanks a lot :D

Creativity!! said...

Yvonne :- Thanks a Lot :D

Gauri Mathur said...


Gauri Mathur said...

And you have a mast template!!!!!

Creativity!! said...

@ Gauri :- Thanks a lot Dear :)

7IYvmNt339E1TK5e0BX3yuHL5ovyiXuQ.pdHPZc- said...

Sure one day your dream prince will come.. .. it is always upto you to make the man you marry turn into your prince.. fairy tales exist in books.. in life you have to create the fairy tale by your efforts.. I am sure you will be able to do it...

Creativity!! said...


chinnu said...

wow! such a lovely n romantic poem...... don wry darling all ur dreams wil come true :)
evn i liked "Breathing from each other's breath" lovely words..... :)
u rock dear.... :)