Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Comforting Star :) :)


The Days Breeze By,
The Nights Fly As If,
I Slept On The Wings Of An Eagle :)
I Miss You A Lot :(

Very Thirsty To See Your Sweet Face :)
Extremely Hungry To Hear Your Melodious Voice :)

At Times You Seem So Shy ;)
That, You Cover Your Face With Thick Blankets.....
At Times You Seem So Outgoing, Still....
I Love You :)

Longing To See Your Tears As A Ocean
When Your Heart Breaks Into Fragments,
Profuse Bleeding Soul,
Flowing As Ocean.....

I Miss You :(
I Love You :)
I Wish Both Stay,
Together In Each Others Arms :)

Ps :- Dearies, Again An Imaginary Poem :) Title Is "Comforting Star".....This Title Was Suggested By Kelly, To Angels' Sleep Poem :) I Liked This Title A Lot..So Used Here, For This Poem :) :) Thanks A Ton Kelly, For The Title :) :)

Dearies, Extremely Thanks To All Those Who Commented To The Previous Post......All Your Comments Extremely Inspired, Motivated Me A Lot :) Ever Grateful To All Of You :) :)

7 comments:

Yellow Tulip said...

very romantic dear...:)..pic goes soo well with this:)...very nice:)

Being Pramoda... said...

HI Sahana...

Very nice n cute pic..:)..

And it a was fantastic write up...keep it up..:)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Picture and poem excellent.

Yvonne.

Vyshu said...

Lovely words Dear ..:)

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Sahana:)

Greetings:)

Well thought out, beautifully conceived poem with many word pictures painted with great expertise. I particularly like this stanza:

Longing To See Your Tears As A Ocean
When Your Heart Breaks Into Fragments,
Profuse Bleeding Soul,
Flowing As Ocean.....


I can see the copious tears, I can see the heart breaking into fragments and the profusely bleeding soul. I just feel helpless and spellbound by these amazing words.

Have a nice day Sahana:)
Joseph

septembermom said...

I think the title works great for this one! Very lovely poem. Your words are always right from the heart.

Yellow Tulip said...

hey dear u have been awarded:)