Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Feeling As A Volcano.......


Burning Tears,
Burning Emotions,
Burning Feelings,
Bursted Out, In Form Of
Volcano.....

Mentally I Collapsed,
But You Held Me Tightly,
Hugged Me, Trying To Console
And To Rejoin Fragments
Of Heart, Soul & Mind.......

PS :- Dearies, Just An Imagined Poem :) Its About A Gem of Friends :) :) Dearies, Suggest Me A Title For This :D

PPS :- Dearies, Thanks A Zillion For All Your Best Wishes Conveyed In My Previous Post :D

8 comments:

septembermom said...

The last stanza is great! Another wonderful poem:)

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Sahana:)

Fantastic comparison of a volcano to a bursting heart. True friends are always there in times of distress. I am glad you have such wonderful friends who are there to comfort and console you.

Lovely poem and an amazing photo.

Wish you all the best Sahana:)
Joseph

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A wonderful poem which was a pleasure to read.


Yvonne.

Being Pramoda... said...

Wonderful expressions and loved the imagination..Thanks sahana

Leo said...

hey Sahana, even I feel like a volcano at times! good imagination! :)

Snow White said...

Hi sahana..this is snow white(suma)..wonderful poem dear..loved your imagination :)thanks a lot for your comments :)i too liked both of your blogs.. :) wil surely read all your posts :) keep going dear :)

Gauri Mathur said...

:):)

manivannan said...

Wonderful comparison sahana :-) Beautiful!

BTW, my title suggestion - Emotional Volcano; he he plzzz lol!!