Your cheerful smile
Your caressing hand
It's the really simple things
That make your life look so grand
You're special to me,
It's in your eyes
I see the truth
There is no disguise
It's your spirit
Maybe your soul
But my life without you
Would feel painfully old
You've been a true friend
I hope you stay
I would be so very empty
If you ever went away
13 comments:
Wonderful words and sentiment.
Yvonne.
Wonderful poem!! Who is the friend by the way? you are very good at imagining though I must say... as you said all your poems are your imaginations!! :-)
What will he or she reply to this, if your friend was a human. If he was a dog or something then of course I do not know...
Let's say he is a human will he reply this way? Very interesting... let me try a hand in imagining with you here..
Oh my darling what you are
Makes me want to come nearer
It is you who make me warm
In my cold winter life form
Oh my dearest friend who loves me so
Let me hold you and hug you more
Your words fill me up with honey so sweet
Flowing in my veins make my heart slow beat
How I would like to hold you tight
your face close to my chest to hide
Let me protect you from the bad world
You will smell only roses, you are my world
It is who draw me to you all the time
By your sofness and smile
How can I go away my dearest
When this lasts all the while?
--- hey!! Yipeee!! I too wrote a poem! Gosh!!
It you is who draw me to you all the time
By your softness and smile
How can I go away my dearest
When this lasts all the while?
the first line missed the word you..sorr for the error..
whew!!
Hey the guinea pigs are so chwweeeettttttttttttttttttt!!
how cweeett!! You got them at home?? how cool!!
I would love to borrow this sweet poem when sending a special note to my friends! It's so nice:) Love your blog's layout! So pretty.
@Welcome To My World OF Poetry :- Thanks a lot :)
Alphabets ji :- Thanks a lot for such a Sweet Cherishable Poem :) Congrats...even u too cultivated composing poems:) Great!!!! Extremely great:) SO do come up with poetry Blog:) Let me publish this poem in both blogs :)
Apbhabets ji :- S, I ve guinea pigs at home..it was gifted by one of my close hearted friend :)
September Mom :- Surely u can borrow this poem!!!!! Thanks a lot Dear :) Hugs :D
lovely poem.... it brings smile on my face... :)
Light hearted, simple and Very sweet take on frndship..:)
cheers..:)
@ Kim :- ohh.....so chweet Smile :) Thanks a Lot:)
@ Chaarz :- Thanks a Lot :)
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