Sunday, May 10, 2009

Before I Was Myself, You Made Me, Me :)

Before I was myself you made me, me
With love and patience, discipline and tears,
Then bit by bit stepped back to set me free,

Allowing me to sail upon my sea,
Though well within the headlands of your fears.
Before I was myself you made me, me

With dreams enough of what I was to be
And hopes that would be sculpted by the years,
Then bit by bit stepped back to set me free,

Relinquishing your powers gradually
To let me shape myself among my peers.
Before I was myself you made me, me,

And being good and wise, you gracefully
As dancers when the last sweet cadence nears
Bit by bit stepped back to set me free.

For love inspires learning naturally:
The mind assents to what the heart reveres.
And so it was through love you made me, me
By slowly stepping back to set me free.

Ps :- This poem is composed on occasion of Mother's Day, May 10th :D Exclusively for Mothers :)


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Hii. what a beautful poem!!
More than your wishing your mom I wish that one day you too become a mother!!

Creativity!! said...

Thanks a Lot:)


A beautiful poem for Mother's Day, here in the UK we celebrate Mothers' Day in March,
Hope all mothers in the States have a great day..........well all mothers everywhere.


Creativity!! said...

@ Welcome to My Poetry World :- Thanks a lot:)

Pallav said...

on mothers day..
u wrote terrific poem
its beautiful

Creativity!! said...

@ Pallav :- :)

septembermom said...

So beautifully written. It so touched that mama heart in me!!

Creativity!! said...

@ September Mom :- Thanks a Lot :D

ARUNA said...

wow that's such a lovely poem.......nicely written!!!

Thanks for ur lovely comment on my blog....wud b glad if i know ur name!

Chaarz said...

Lovely dedication for the one who we all love the most..MOM..:)