Sunday, March 14, 2010

SOUL!!!!!!!!!!!



Squeezing Soul
 
Occupying Collapsed Heart To Experience

 
Unburnt Ashes Of  Breath

Loudly Howling To Save Life!!!!!!!!

PS :- Dearies, Thanks A Lot For All Your Cherishable Compliments For Previous Post, "Anger V/S Patience".

9 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Well written words with the message coming across.

Have a good day.
Yvonne.

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Sahana:)

Greetings and good wishes on Sunday:)

Amazing poetical composition with profound meaning.

Anyway, I am scared of hell even if there is a silver lining:):):)

Best wishes:)
Joseph

Anya said...

Hi Sahana

Very well written
its a poem that let you think ....
;)

Good night !!

greetings

Kareltje =^.^=
Anya :-)

septembermom said...

Like that "unburnt ashes of breath". Great imagery! Thanks!!

Amity said...

What a cry of the soul...:) You write acrostics very well, why don't you write for AO dear?

Love,

Amity

Being Pramoda... said...

hi sahana, its very well written.. keep it up dear..:)

May said...

Lovely poem as always....it will put something on your mind....May your day be filled joy.

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PinkZz said...

very well written post :)