Saturday, October 9, 2010

Wake Up Call!!!!!!!

The Waves That Hit Me
The Leaf That Caressed My Cheeks
The Sun Who Kissed My Eyes 
Was A Wake Up Call.
When I Was Asleep. 

PS :- Readers Thanks A Lot For All Your Cherishable Compliments For The Previous Post, "NEW".


Jaspreet said...

The pic compliments your creativity really well :)

flycatcher said...

whether it is the shorter or the longer version, your expressions are clearly very refined and soft. it makes reading your works a pleasure and a delight. eagerly looking forward to more varied forms of your "creativity"!! sahana, you are doing fine, keep it up!!

welcome to my world of poetry said...

I love the beach and you wonderful poem compliaments it just right.


KParthasarathi said...

Wow.That is quite an imaginative and nice way of getting a wake up call.Nice poem

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

i totally love this..the pic. enhances the poem you made :P

Anonymous said...

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I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poems to share, let our fellow poets read and encourage your creative work, and have fun reading other poets from our list and discover fresh friendship as well!
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Anonymous said...

Very refreshing and beautiful.. cute fun it is.. :)
Happy Monday

May said...

Lovely, and just what I needed a wake up call.

septembermom said...

You're a very talented young woman. Please continue sharing your talent with all of us. You make me smile :)