Saturday, May 15, 2010

LOST LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Where Did You Go ??
Your Breath Searched Everywhere.....
Each & Every Corner of My Heart, I Searched......
Tired of Searching You Far Off  Places
Still I Didn't Find You :(
My Fragile Heart Collapsed........
Finally, I'm All Alone......

You Know, I Can't Live Without You...
I Still Remember Our First Meeting,
I Still Remember Our First Poem,
I Still Remember Our First Interaction,
I Still Remember Our First Conversation,
I Still Remember Those Fabulous Dreams,
I Still Remember Our Tour To Hill Station,
I Still Remember The First Day We Met :) :)

Building Crores of Dreams & Wishes,
Where Did You Go, Leaving Your Breath All Alone :((

PS :- Dearies, This Poem Is Completely Based On My Own Pure Imagination :) :)

PPS :- Dearies, Thanks A Bunch For All Your Cherishable Compliments For Previous Post, "Another Award From Amity".

Wish You All A Very Happy Weekend :) :) 
 

18 comments:

Anya said...

Love begins with a smile,
grows with a kiss,
and ends with a teardrop......

Lovely written :))

Enjoy
this weekend ^__^

Hemanth Potluri said...

lovely write up :)..

love is a word what comes with it is unmeasurable :)...but ending with a pain ..is always bad :(..

urs..hemu..

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

An excellent write and I so enjoyed reading it.Thanks for sharing a most lovely poem.

Yvonne.

Amity said...

I feel like writing one like this... :)

Beautiful but sad poem Sahana, but it's not all about your feelings isn't it?

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..so nice..full of lonesome emotions..>.<

btw go claim your award from me! :D

May said...

Well written....Love is the greatest emotion in the world.

septembermom said...

Beauty and positivity always here to greet me. Thank you!!

anupama said...

Dear Sahana,
Good Morning!
Dear,are you seriousabout the forthcoming exams or lost in the thoughts of the past?
If it were your breath a you claim,it wul return!)
Love is more of thorns than roses!:)You will gradually learn!
Best of luck and a wonderul day ahead,
Sasneham,
Anu

sulagna ™ said...

heyii sweety, love is only to be called love if it leraves you with a smile..but yes this poem is really wellw ritten

thanks a bunch for wishing G on his birthday,it made him feel really nice :)

Jingle said...

what beautiful love poem,
you did it very amazingly.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/24/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-and-more/

The Celebrate Poet of April Runner-up Award
plus
two more on the bottom....
Happy Tuesday!
;)

techyfox said...

great job

anthonynorth said...

Beautifully done, and the image of breath is excellent.
You'll find mine here.

petemarshall1 said...

that had a wow to it, a love & a pain captured so well cheers Pete

Brian Miller said...

what beautiful love you have crafted here...

Rajlakshmi said...

love is made like that,..
very touching write...

TimKeeton said...

Very nice.

Thanks for sharing. I hope you will visit my sites:

Tim Keeton - A Writer's Tale

and

The Undead Poets Society

Rhyme on!

Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
A Week 19 Perfect Poet Award Winner

joanny said...

Oh sweet love --- oh sweet heart break an endless dance of lovers through time and space. well written. well said.

Joanny

came by jingle today.