Sunday, April 4, 2010

A Night Mare!!!!!!!!!




Chetan Was Brought up By His Mom Till He Attained 3Years. His Mom Was Suffering From A Dreadful Disease. Though She Suffered A Lot, Never Visited Any Doctor For Her Treatment, Thinking She Can't Leave Chetan All Alone At Home & Also She Can't Take Chetan To Hospital. 

His Father Was A Businessman & Was Very Busy With His Meetings, Conferences. He Never Paid Much Attention To His Family Matters. He Used To Come Home Late Nights. Being Stressed & Tired, He Would Just Stretch His Legs Never Enquiring How Is His Wife & Son Doing ??

As Usual, Chetan's Mom Dropped  Him To  Play Home. Play Home Timing Was From 9am-11am.  All Parents Came By 11am To Take Back Their Kids. But, Chetan's Mother Didn't Come Back To Pick Him Up. He Was Depressed & Was Terribly Crying. He Was Hungry & When His Play Home Teacher Tried To Feed Him, He Neglected Saying, His Noon Food Is Served & Fed By His Mom. He Started Howling, "I Want Mamma"........I Want Mamma"..........I Want Mamma...............His Cries Were So Loud That, All Neighbors of Play Home Came Out of Their Houses & Started Consoling The Child. 

The Play Home Teacher, Called Up His Landline Number. But, No One Received The Phone. So His Teacher Called Up His Dad's Cell & Told That, Chetan's Mom Didn't Come To Pick Him Up & Even No One Is Answering Repeated Landline Calls. Then, His Dad Rushed Back Home. Repeatedly Rang The Door Bell. Maid Was Waiting Outside. Maid Rushed To Him Saying, His Wife Fell Unconscious On The Main Road & So Residents Took Her To Hospital. 

Chetan's Father First Decided To Pick His Son & Inform His Play Home Teacher. Chetan's Father Reached Play Home & Informed Teacher That, His Wife Has Been Admitted In Hospital. Chetan Was Unwilling To His Father, Saying "I Don't Come With You.....I Wan't Mamma......You Never Showed Dad's Love. I Love Mom....I Hate You.....I Want Mom.....Bring My Mom Here.....I Will Come Home".


His Teacher Consoled & Convinced Him To Go With His Dad & His Mom Would Really Come Back To Him. Then, Chetan Went With His Dad To Hospital & Residents Told That, Chetan's Mom Had Heart Problem & Doctors Are Doing Surgery On Her.  

It Was Already 8pm & Suddenly Heavy Downpour Started When, Chetan & His Dad Were On Foot Back Home. It Was Then, Chetan's Dad Realised His Mistake & Rectified His Mistake. Before Leaving Hospital Chetan's Dad Had Told Doctors To Inform Him, About His Wife's Health Condition. Residents Also Forced Him To Go Home & They Would Stay In Hospital. Chetan's Dad Was Inconsolable On His Way Back Home. The Vehicle Lights Pierced His Eyes, The Horns Made Him Fear For The Dreadful Mistake He Made.....He Was Extremely Depressed. Chetan Seeing His Dad's State, Consoled Him Saying, Dad, I Love You Too....I Scolded You In Anger.....I'm Sorry Dad.....

Chetan's Dad Opened The Lock of Main Door. Entered The House & Immediately His Cell Phone Rang. Call Was From Doctor Who Operated His Wife. Doctor Said, His Operation Was Successful & His Wife Is Fine. After Few Days, She Came Back Home. All Three Were Happy & Smiled At Each Other. Chetan's Dad Lovingly Grabbed His Small  Family In His Arms :) :)

PS :- Dearies, Thanks A Lot For All Your Cherishable Compliments For Previous Post, "THE POOL".

Written For Thursday Tales.

10 comments:

Being Pramoda... said...

hey shana, u started writing tales? .. wow.. good .. u did it well.. keep doing..

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Very good, made excellent reading.

Yvonne,

anupama said...

Dear Sahana,
HAPPY EASTER!
Hope is the gift of Easter!
love,care and understanding make the house into a home;sweet home.
It's a nice story!I enjoyed reading it!
Sasneham,
Anu

KParthasarathi said...

Thnks.It is a nice story.Keep them coming

Leo said...

hey Sahana.. this was really good.. :) glad u joined in at Tales Thursday.. keep writing every week! :)

ps: the template is lovely dear, but could u plz change the layout to a normal two col? the post area seems sooo conjusted...

Anya said...

Its a very wonderful story :))
Keep writing you are FANTASTIC ...

Rajat said...

Sometimes you realize the importance of people very close to you too late in life.

Ji said...

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have fun in the game!

Amity said...

now we are both at Thursday Tales...:)

keep writing dear!

Sumukh said...

That is good i neat heart touching story...
really touched...!!!
-Sumukh