Friday, January 29, 2010

FAILURE............

Failing To Climb The Mountain Peak
After Loosing The Grip Which Was
In Contact With The Huge Rocks, Now
Lying As A Corpse On The Ground. 

Unwilling To Try Again To Climb Because 
Ruptured Soul Is
Entangled With Broken Heart. 


"Failure Is The Stepping Stone For Success"

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7 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Love the poem, the word "failure" don't exist with me as the adage says if at first you don't succeed try, try again.

Take care.
Yvonne.

mads said...

heyy..very well said dear..failures are stepping stones to success, nd one shuld learn from the failures..!

ABHISHEK SiM said...

Another acrostic:

Fumble not for there is light
At the tunnel's end.
Instead embolden your step
Leap! Run! Fight! But don't stop!
'Unable' is a feeble excuse
Raise that bar a bit higher!
Every stumble point be your
Stepping-stone!

Hemanth Potluri said...

no one can write such a beauty of acro ..except u sahana...the words penned are really soo nice :).

urs..hemu..

Anya said...

You are very creative with writing
Love your lines today :-)

Have a wonderful weekend!!

septembermom said...

Very good use of imagery and word choice in this acrostic. You're so good at these!

R.Ramakrishnan said...

Splendid stuff and so meaningful !