Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Comforting Star :) :)


The Days Breeze By,
The Nights Fly As If,
I Slept On The Wings Of An Eagle :)
I Miss You A Lot :(

Very Thirsty To See Your Sweet Face :)
Extremely Hungry To Hear Your Melodious Voice :)

At Times You Seem So Shy ;)
That, You Cover Your Face With Thick Blankets.....
At Times You Seem So Outgoing, Still....
I Love You :)

Longing To See Your Tears As A Ocean
When Your Heart Breaks Into Fragments,
Profuse Bleeding Soul,
Flowing As Ocean.....

I Miss You :(
I Love You :)
I Wish Both Stay,
Together In Each Others Arms :)

Ps :- Dearies, Again An Imaginary Poem :) Title Is "Comforting Star".....This Title Was Suggested By Kelly, To Angels' Sleep Poem :) I Liked This Title A Lot..So Used Here, For This Poem :) :) Thanks A Ton Kelly, For The Title :) :)

Dearies, Extremely Thanks To All Those Who Commented To The Previous Post......All Your Comments Extremely Inspired, Motivated Me A Lot :) Ever Grateful To All Of You :) :)

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7 comments:

  1. Yellow TulipSeptember 8, 2009 at 3:12 PM

    very romantic dear...:)..pic goes soo well with this:)...very nice:)

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  2. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 8, 2009 at 5:53 PM

    HI Sahana...

    Very nice n cute pic..:)..

    And it a was fantastic write up...keep it up..:)

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  3. RHYTHM AND RHYMESeptember 8, 2009 at 6:59 PM

    Picture and poem excellent.

    Yvonne.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2009 at 8:05 PM

    Lovely words Dear ..:)

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  5. Joseph PulikotilSeptember 8, 2009 at 9:25 PM

    Hi Sahana:)

    Greetings:)

    Well thought out, beautifully conceived poem with many word pictures painted with great expertise. I particularly like this stanza:

    Longing To See Your Tears As A Ocean
    When Your Heart Breaks Into Fragments,
    Profuse Bleeding Soul,
    Flowing As Ocean.....


    I can see the copious tears, I can see the heart breaking into fragments and the profusely bleeding soul. I just feel helpless and spellbound by these amazing words.

    Have a nice day Sahana:)
    Joseph

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  6. septembermomSeptember 9, 2009 at 1:50 AM

    I think the title works great for this one! Very lovely poem. Your words are always right from the heart.

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  7. Yellow TulipSeptember 9, 2009 at 11:46 PM

    hey dear u have been awarded:)

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