Where Did You Go ??
Your Breath Searched Everywhere.....
Each & Every Corner of My Heart, I Searched......
Tired of Searching You Far Off Places
Still I Didn't Find You :(
My Fragile Heart Collapsed........
Finally, I'm All Alone......
You Know, I Can't Live Without You...
I Still Remember Our First Meeting,
I Still Remember Our First Poem,
I Still Remember Our First Interaction,
I Still Remember Our First Conversation,
I Still Remember Those Fabulous Dreams,
I Still Remember Our Tour To Hill Station,
I Still Remember The First Day We Met :) :)
Building Crores of Dreams & Wishes,
Where Did You Go, Leaving Your Breath All Alone :((
PS :- Dearies, This Poem Is Completely Based On My Own Pure Imagination :) :)
PPS :- Dearies, Thanks A Bunch For All Your Cherishable Compliments For Previous Post, "Another Award From Amity".
Love begins with a smile,
ReplyDeletegrows with a kiss,
and ends with a teardrop......
Lovely written :))
Enjoy
this weekend ^__^
lovely write up :)..
ReplyDeletelove is a word what comes with it is unmeasurable :)...but ending with a pain ..is always bad :(..
urs..hemu..
An excellent write and I so enjoyed reading it.Thanks for sharing a most lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
I feel like writing one like this... :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful but sad poem Sahana, but it's not all about your feelings isn't it?
Well written....Love is the greatest emotion in the world.
ReplyDeleteBeauty and positivity always here to greet me. Thank you!!
ReplyDeleteDear Sahana,
ReplyDeleteGood Morning!
Dear,are you seriousabout the forthcoming exams or lost in the thoughts of the past?
If it were your breath a you claim,it wul return!)
Love is more of thorns than roses!:)You will gradually learn!
Best of luck and a wonderul day ahead,
Sasneham,
Anu
heyii sweety, love is only to be called love if it leraves you with a smile..but yes this poem is really wellw ritten
ReplyDeletethanks a bunch for wishing G on his birthday,it made him feel really nice :)
what beautiful love poem,
ReplyDeleteyou did it very amazingly.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/24/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-and-more/
ReplyDeleteThe Celebrate Poet of April Runner-up Award
plus
two more on the bottom....
Happy Tuesday!
;)
great job
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done, and the image of breath is excellent.
ReplyDeleteYou'll find mine here.
that had a wow to it, a love & a pain captured so well cheers Pete
ReplyDeletewhat beautiful love you have crafted here...
ReplyDeletelove is made like that,..
ReplyDeletevery touching write...
Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing. I hope you will visit my sites:
Tim Keeton - A Writer's Tale
and
The Undead Poets Society
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
A Week 19 Perfect Poet Award Winner
Oh sweet love --- oh sweet heart break an endless dance of lovers through time and space. well written. well said.
ReplyDeleteJoanny
came by jingle today.