Squeezing Soul
Occupying Collapsed Heart To Experience
Unburnt Ashes Of Breath
Occupying Collapsed Heart To Experience
Unburnt Ashes Of Breath
Loudly Howling To Save Life!!!!!!!!
PS :- Dearies, Thanks A Lot For All Your Cherishable Compliments For Previous Post, "Anger V/S Patience".
Well written words with the message coming across.
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Yvonne.
Hi Sahana:)
ReplyDeleteGreetings and good wishes on Sunday:)
Amazing poetical composition with profound meaning.
Anyway, I am scared of hell even if there is a silver lining:):):)
Best wishes:)
Joseph
Hi Sahana
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its a poem that let you think ....
;)
Good night !!
greetings
Kareltje =^.^=
Anya :-)
Like that "unburnt ashes of breath". Great imagery! Thanks!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cry of the soul...:) You write acrostics very well, why don't you write for AO dear?
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Amity
hi sahana, its very well written.. keep it up dear..:)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem as always....it will put something on your mind....May your day be filled joy.
ReplyDeletevery well written post :)
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