Beautiful Scented Flowers
Showered From Above :D
I Could See The Three Precious Lovable
Words Written In Air :D
Thunderstorms Took Away My Heart,
To That Hidden Special Star :D
I Flew So High Above,
That, I Heard Star Whispering,
I LOVE YOU :D
A Thrilling......Exciting Experience,
Dream Was Twisted Into Reality :D
I Told Star That,
I Want To Have A Huggy Cozy Sleep :)
That Star,
Stretched His Arms, On My Shoulders,
I Leaned On His Shoulders,And
Had A Pleasant Sound Sleep :D
Ps :- Dearies, Again An Imaginary Poem :D Wish You All A Pleasant Sound Sleep :D Good Night :D Sweet Dreams......Take Care :D
Dearies, Can You Suggest Me A Title For This?? I Don't Know, Why I Gave Title As Angels' Sleep :) I Feel Its Not Suitable :(. Kindly Suggest Title :D
Stretched His Arms, On My Shoulders,
I Leaned On His Shoulders,And
Had A Pleasant Sound Sleep :D
Ps :- Dearies, Again An Imaginary Poem :D Wish You All A Pleasant Sound Sleep :D Good Night :D Sweet Dreams......Take Care :D
Dearies, Can You Suggest Me A Title For This?? I Don't Know, Why I Gave Title As Angels' Sleep :) I Feel Its Not Suitable :(. Kindly Suggest Title :D
A lovely poem with a good usage of words,
ReplyDeleteI think the title you have given the poem is
spot on.
Have a good week-end.
Yvonne
Hey good one... good night ... Glad that i have read it now itself..:)
ReplyDeleteTitle is good ..:)
who says title is not appropriate?! its a beautiful poem! and title is spot on! :)
ReplyDeleteloved it Sahana!
Peaceful dreams to you too! I like your title too, but maybe "Comforting Star" is another choice? Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteYvonne :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D
ReplyDeletePramoda :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D
ReplyDeleteVinay :- Thanks A Lot :D
ReplyDeleteKelly :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D S, Comforting Star Is A Great Title :D
ReplyDeletevery sweet dear:):)..
ReplyDeleteYellow Tulip :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D
ReplyDeletethis one is really good dear:)
ReplyDeleteAngel :- Thanks A Ton Dear :D
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