Sunday, May 17, 2009

My Special Friend :)


Your cheerful smile
Your caressing hand

It's the really simple things

That make your life look so grand


You're special to me,

It's in your eyes

I see the truth

There is no disguise


It's your spirit

Maybe your soul

But my life without you

Would feel painfully old


You've been a true friend

I hope you stay
I would be so very empty

If you ever went away

13 comments:

  1. Wonderful words and sentiment.


    Yvonne.

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  2. Wonderful poem!! Who is the friend by the way? you are very good at imagining though I must say... as you said all your poems are your imaginations!! :-)

    What will he or she reply to this, if your friend was a human. If he was a dog or something then of course I do not know...
    Let's say he is a human will he reply this way? Very interesting... let me try a hand in imagining with you here..

    Oh my darling what you are
    Makes me want to come nearer
    It is you who make me warm
    In my cold winter life form

    Oh my dearest friend who loves me so
    Let me hold you and hug you more
    Your words fill me up with honey so sweet
    Flowing in my veins make my heart slow beat

    How I would like to hold you tight
    your face close to my chest to hide
    Let me protect you from the bad world
    You will smell only roses, you are my world

    It is who draw me to you all the time
    By your sofness and smile
    How can I go away my dearest
    When this lasts all the while?

    --- hey!! Yipeee!! I too wrote a poem! Gosh!!

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  3. It you is who draw me to you all the time
    By your softness and smile
    How can I go away my dearest
    When this lasts all the while?

    the first line missed the word you..sorr for the error..

    whew!!

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  4. Hey the guinea pigs are so chwweeeettttttttttttttttttt!!

    how cweeett!! You got them at home?? how cool!!

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  5. I would love to borrow this sweet poem when sending a special note to my friends! It's so nice:) Love your blog's layout! So pretty.

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  6. @Welcome To My World OF Poetry :- Thanks a lot :)

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  7. Alphabets ji :- Thanks a lot for such a Sweet Cherishable Poem :) Congrats...even u too cultivated composing poems:) Great!!!! Extremely great:) SO do come up with poetry Blog:) Let me publish this poem in both blogs :)

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  8. Apbhabets ji :- S, I ve guinea pigs at home..it was gifted by one of my close hearted friend :)

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  9. September Mom :- Surely u can borrow this poem!!!!! Thanks a lot Dear :) Hugs :D

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  10. lovely poem.... it brings smile on my face... :)

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  11. Light hearted, simple and Very sweet take on frndship..:)

    cheers..:)

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  12. @ Kim :- ohh.....so chweet Smile :) Thanks a Lot:)

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