Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Sailing Life !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 

It Was The Regular Place Where Two Hearts Always Meet Each Other. Many of The Hearts Prefer To Spend Some Time In Weekend, Near The Sea Shore. As Usual, Pradeep & Priya Sighed A Huge Relief After A Tough Week. Both Were Struggling To Find Time For Themselves. 

Both Couldn't Even See Each Other Faces. Their Written Notes  & Messages Were The Only Way of Communication, as Using Of Cell Phones Was Strictly Prohibited In Their Respective Work Place.

Luckily One Morning, Pradeep Got A Memo Stating, His Work Has Been Very Much Appreciated & Company Wishes To Give Him A Tour Voucher. He Immediately Messaged Priya & Priya Reading The Message Was Very Much Excited & With Great Difficulty She Got 15Days Leave.

Both Decided To Meet At Their Regular Meeting Point, i.e. Sea Shore.. As They Wanted To Breathe A Fresh Air, Play With Waves, Wet Their Foot After A Prolonged Period of Hectic Work. Both of Them Met Each Other At 6pm As Scheduled. As Soon As Pradeep Saw Priya He Just Grabbed Her In His Arms Took Her Near The Waves. It Was As Though Their New Life Started Sailing When Pradeep Said He Was Promoted To Next Hierarchy Level & Has Been Transferred To California. 

Priya Was Extremely Excited & Reminded Him Her Long Promise That, "One Fine Day Pradeep Will Prove What He Is & What He Is Capable Of ". 

PS :- Dearies, This Story Is Not As Good As Previous One's. Your Opinions, Suggestions, Advices Are Very Much Welcome. 

Written For,
Image Courtesy :-  Sadir 89 

 

15 comments:

Snow White said...

hi sahana,
i loved the post dear..its really nice :)

welcome to my world of poetry said...

A really lovely poem and a picture to compliament it. Thanks for sharing.
Yvonne.

Brian Miller said...

really, nicely written...if ever i went back in time it wouldbe to write sucha ship...

Amity said...

A beautiful tale Sahana...:)Spending moments with a loved one in the seashore is truly romantic!

Very inspiring and truly a happy ending! Loved it!

Good morning!

jingleyanqiu said...

awesome job!

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Sahana:)

Very interesting story. But somehow I felt Priya would have been upset to know that Pradeep is going to California and they will be separated. May be my line of thinking is wrong.

Best wishes:)
Joseph

septembermom said...

Very captivating tale. Great job!

morganna said...

Very nice poem. I agree with an earlier commenter that perhaps Priya will be upset that Pradeep is going to California. But I liked it very much.

venkat said...

hii sahana..hru??
its a very lovely poem..its a gr8 job yar..
all the best for ur future..tc..

ಡಾ.ಕೃಷ್ಣಮೂರ್ತಿ.ಡಿ.ಟಿ. said...

Nice poem.keep going with gusto.

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Jesson And Rey Ann said...

A really lovely poem and a picture to compliament it. Thanks for sharing

Ana_treek said...

Refreshingly simple and optimistic:)

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